Thursday, October 31, 2013

Interview with Harrison Demchick, author of The Listeners... Lia Mack's BB Writers Retreat presents...

Welcome back to Lia Mack's BB Writers Retreat Series!

In honor of Halloween week and all things horrifying and disturbing, I'm very excited to have with us as our featured guest author literary horror writer Harrison Demchick, author of The Listeners (Bancroft Press, 2012).

The Listeners (Bancroft Press, 2012)
"Harrison Demchick has written a beautiful and disgusting, wonderful and horrifying book with a strong voice and lyrical quality . . ."
   —Ageless Pageless Reviews

Harrison Demchick

Lia Mack: I'm glad it's still light outside as I'm already a bit creeped out by your book cover

Can you please start us off by telling a little about yourself:

Harrison Demchick: Most of the time, I'm a developmental editor with editorial boutique Ambitious Enterprises. What this means is that I work with authors of fiction and memoirs on improving all elements of their work, from character arc to logic to story structure and dialogue and everything in-between. It also means I get to read for a living, and to analyze stories for a living, all of which I absolutely love. When I'm not doing that, I spend my time being very odd, frequently in ways that have to do with Spider-Man, but often also in ways that have to do in some respect with writing, whether it's a song or a story or something else entirely.

Lia Mack: Can you tell us a little about your book?

Harrison Demchick: The Listeners is a coming-of-age story in a literary horror context. In a borough quarantined due to an airborne illness that causes deformity, insanity, and death, a 14-year-old boy named Daniel, orphaned by the plague, is caught up with a one-eared gang/cult called the Listeners. But all he really wants is to find his best friend Katie, trapped elsewhere in the quarantine.

Lia Mack: What was the most challenging aspect of writing this particular story?

The Listeners has undergone so many transformations that it's difficult to say. In its screenplay form, it wasn't my first--not by a long shot--but it was my first original. My background was in writing short stories, so developing a full-length narrative was a substantial challenge. The biggest turning point in all of that may have come once a film producer became interested. His feedback completely changed the third act of the story, which proved to be fundamental in completing Daniel's character arc.

On the novel side, the greatest challenge was the process of rediscovering my prose voice, and more specifically the appropriate voice for this novel. As formats alone, screenplays and novels operate with a drastically different language, meaning that, although the substance of the story is the same in both formats, the way it's told--and so much of an effective novel is based upon the way it's told--has changed substantially. It took a lot of trial and error to find the style that worked for me, and then quite a bit of revision to rein myself back when that style became overbearing.

Lia Mack: Ultimate question...Why do you write?

Harrison Demchick: Because I can't not. If I didn't write, all these weird ideas and narratives and character interactions would spend all their time bouncing around in my head, in which case there might not be room for anything else. I've been doing it since kindergarten--or at least that's the earliest record that exists, as my parents still have my carefully illustrated story about the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. Writing is intrinsic to who I am. I can't really imagine my life without it.

Lia Mack: Can you describe a bit how your venture into writing looked like? How did you come to be a writer as your career?

Harrison Demchick: Well, writing isn't my career just yet. Writing is rarely an author's career, and if it is, then they've become spectacularly successful at it--which would be great, obviously, and I'm working hard to make it happen in one way or another. But as far as my venture into publishing, or specifically publishing The Listeners, I came at it in an unusual way. I've been working in the publishing industry since my first internship in the summer of 2005, which is coincidentally the same time I began work on The Listeners.

So while I was learning to be an editor, The Listeners was always there, though not necessarily in its present form. At first it was a series of short stories. Then it became a screenplay, which was optioned for film; then, finally, on the eventual publisher's advice, I adapted it into a novel.

But even then, I wasn't sure I was going to pursue publishing--not because I wasn't proud of The Listeners, but because being in the publishing industry is a bit of a mixed blessing. On one hand, you know the field and know what goes into making a book successful; on the other hand, you know what goes into making a book successful--and that's marketing. Most of the time, it's an incredible effort that yields very little regardless of the quality of the book. I'd been Sisyphus too many times, advocating for terrific novels I'd had the opportunity to edit, like Ron Cooper's Purple Jesus and Elizabeth Leiknes's The Understory. I hated marketing--still do--and didn't want to take on that fight for The Listeners.

Fortunately, I had enough people around me to tell me how stupid that was. I'd written a novel--a really good novel. It should be published. And the publisher that had recommended I write the story as a novel was interested in publishing it. So that's what we did, and I am very glad about it. And the marketing hasn't even been all that horrible.

Lia Mack: If you don't mind me asking, what are you working on now?

Harrison Demchick: I've actually just finished the first draft of my second entirely original screenplay, and a vastly different one at that. It's a cryptozoological dramedy called Ape Canyon, in which a guy in the midst of a quarter-life crisis drags his big sister along on a Bigfoot-hunting expedition. Alongside that, I'm collaborating with a friend on a zombie musical called Brains. I've written a couple recent short stories, and I've been contemplating releasing a short story collection.

Maybe, someday, I'll write another novel, but right now I have no such plans.

Lia Mack: A zombie musical! I'd like to see that ;)

What does your typical writing day look like?

Harrison Demchick: The idea of typical has undergone a pretty radical transformation in the last few months. For me, writing has always been an isolated activity, and I'm generally self-motivated enough that, if I sit down at my computer and decide I'm going to write, I will get something done. So when my friends would suggest that we get together for "writing parties" in which we would all sit down at a table and work on our individual projects, I was skeptical. I didn't think I would or could be productive in that environment.

But I was seriously wrong. Since we started our writing parties, I have been absurdly productive. And when you're absurdly productive, writing carries with it a high like little else. Without these sessions, I would not yet have finished Ape Canyon. I don't even know if I'd be close.

So now, a typical writing day includes me and a friend or three, either in a coffee shop or at my apartment, working for hours on whatever it is we happen to be writing. If any of us is stuck on something, we can ask the writers around us for feedback. If I write a line of dialogue I particularly like, I can get immediate confirmation as to whether or not it works. It's made writing more fun for me than it's been in years.

Lia Mack: Can you share a photo of what your writing space looks like?

Harrison Demchick: I don't know if I can. I don't own a camera. There's a camera in my computer, but it can't take pictures of itself, and the computer is pretty much the most important part. I'll see if I can come up with something.

Lia Mack: Do you read while you write? What are you reading now?

Harrison Demchick: I'm an editor, so I'm always reading--but most of what I'm reading is unpublished. And when reading is your job, as wonderful as that is, it's often not what you find yourself wanting to do with your free time. But I'm in the middle of a book of H. P. Lovecraft short stories, and there's quite a lot on my bookshelf I'm looking to dive into should I ever go on one of those "vacation" things I've heard so much about.

Lia Mack: If you could go back in time, what advice would you give yourself if you could speak to the aspiring writer you once were?

Harrison Demchick: You know, I honestly don't think I would change anything. Maybe I would clue myself in to the fun of writing with a group, but most likely I'd just leave myself to figure it out on my own.

Besides which, as a dedicated science-fiction and comic book nerd, I know that messing around with the past has terrible repercussions. I go back in time to give myself advice on writing, and the next thing I know, I've never been born and the president is a stegosaurus.

Lia Mack: Thank you so much for being our guest author today. Where can BB readers go online to find you and your work?
Harrison Demchick: Well, they can always check out my poorly maintained website, www.harrisondemchick.com, or my slightly better maintained Facebook page, www.facebook.com/HarrisonDemchick (I don't really have an aptitude for this social media stuff), but if they want to buy the book, they can do that on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or wherever books are sold. The paperback just launched this past weekend.

Sunday, October 27, 2013

The Calm Before the Storm... Or Are My Characters Just Sleeping? Starting a New Novel...

All is quiet.

I woke up to the sound of nothing. Not even a hint of anticipation. It's as though the cloud of heightened energy that collects around me - in my mind - right before starting a new project just vanished, without a trace.

No new plot ideas. No characters babbling. Nothing. Just silence.

I wonder if they're just sleeping.

NaNoWriMo starts in just a few days - National Novel Writing Month. I have participated in the past just for fun, always in the middle of a work in progress to actually use the time for what it's intended for: to start a novel and write, during the month of November, 50K words. No editing. No looking back. Just write.

This year I'm ready to hit the 50K summit. I've got the plot set up in my mind (and in my notes). And I've got momentum plenty as this novel is the sequel to the novel I just finished editing, Waiting for Paint to Dry.

The characters are revved up and excited to finish what they've started.

I just hope they wake up in time.

T-5 days to go. 30 days to write 50K words. Oh, and throw in a holiday or two during that time, and it's not as much time as you think. I've spent the past NaNoWriMo's lamenting over the timing of National Novel Writing Month - WHY NOVEMBER?!??! - but this year I'm determined to put aside my whining and just write. 

Who knows? Maybe I'll write 50,000 words and actually win. Maybe I'll write only 30,000 words. Maybe I'll find I don't like where my plot is going and just write a bunch of crap to be scrapped come December 1st. Who knows...

But the point of writing is to just write. Can't be a writer unless you write! So, write I will.

Just wondering where my characters have run off to without me. Don't hear them in my head today....

Fine. Go ahead. Sleep. Get your rest. Enjoy. I'll be working your tired asses off all next month, so you'll need the energy. Get it now while you can...

Yep.

Writers don't just talk to their characters or hear voices, they even write blog posts of threats to them.

;)

Friday, October 25, 2013

How to Write a Novel during NaNoWriMo, IMO...


Ever wonder how that novel idea in your head will ever make it to those illustrious bookshelves of your bookworm heaven? B&N bookstores, Amazon bestseller list, the library bookshelves. Whatever your idea of where all the good books live, have you ever wondered how on Earth YOU are ever going to get YOUR book there?

Aspiring authors and published authors alike have, at least once at the beginning of their careers, have wondered, hoped, dreamed. I do it too. All day long sometimes. But dreaming and hoping and praying only gets you so far, no matter what it is that you wish to do. 

Write a novel. Write a self-help book. Write a children's book series. Whatever your goal, it's not just to get the words on paper. It's to get them published and up onto that shelf of your dreams.

But the main ingredient that some writers forget that will make their dream come true is something that some writers don't have. 

The guts to do it. 

Fear. Doubt. Self condemnation. Call it what you will, but it holds us all back at one point or another. I see it all the time, in people who have high hopes but not a spine to do anything about it with.

"But this... But that..." So many excuses they could write a book on how to keep yourself locked in a perpetual state of motionlessness.

NaNoWriMo - National Novel Writing Month - starts November 1st. NEXT WEEK!!! It's a great time for all those held back by their fear to JUMP IN with both feet and give their guts a real work out. Forget the fear of failure. Forget the doubting monster keeping you locked up in your writing closet. All you have to do to participate is WRITE!

Just write.

No rules. No editing. No grammar gurus lurking in the shadows.

Just write.

NaNoWriMo is all about getting your words onto the page. Period. And the more the merrier. 50K words in a month is the ultimate goal BUT you don't have to hit the highest peak to summit your own fear of starting something great.

10K words in a month. Even 2k words. It'll be more than you have done now, no? Do you have a novel in you? Do you want to write it? Are your characters banging on the door of your imagination, begging to get out?

Then do it! Write till you heart's content. Everyday, make it a task on your To-Do List and do it.

Just write.

IMO - in my opinion - all you have to do is write and you'll make it. You'll start that writing project you've always dreamt about. And you know what? By writing EVERYDAY, even just 10 minutes a day, you'll find strength, confidence, determination.

And you'll create momentum.

By the end of November, you'll have written the beginning of your novel and you won't be able to stop. The story, the characters, they won't let you stop. And neither will your new self - your writer self - let you stop.

So write.

Just write.

And look me up at NaNoWriMo. If ever you need someone to get out and push because you hit a roadblock or your engine won't start that day, I'll push for you! I'll help you combat your writer demons! I've worked long and hard to keep mine locked up tight, so I know how to do it, IMO.

;)

Thursday, October 24, 2013

NaNoWriMo Starts Next Week... Are You In?!



In honor of NaNoWriMo, which begins next week, I wanted to take a few lines to try to drive up the excitement that's igniting the air in the writing world. Novel writing world, that is.

NaNoWriMo, for those who are new to it, is National Novel Writing Month

A whole month dedicated to getting those words of your story onto the page, screen, notepad...anywhere that gets them out of your head and into written form.  

And it starts November 1st, NEXT WEEK!!! :))) 

The goal of NaNoWriMo is to write 50,000 words in the month of November. You can start a new novel. Continue writing your WIP. Or just start something and see where it takes you, so long as you write 50,000 words by month's end.

How do you write 50,000 words in one month? 

Simple. You just write! And write. And write! Don't stop for edits. Just keep writing! 

At least that's the way most people do it. The whole point is that all first drafts suck. They do, no matter who you are or how great a writer you can be. Even the best of the best admit that their first drafts suck. And who cares if it sucks! It's a first draft! You're not going to publish your first draft, traditional route or self. You'll edit and rewrite and edit and rewrite until it's polished and shined to be worthy of putting your name on the front cover... Unless, of course, you're the author of the unreadable 50 shades of grey and you have no shame... but I digress...


"I'm not a very good writer, but I'm an excellent rewriter." 
~ James Michener

I think this is a great quote to remember and keep in mind as you write and attempt to summit the 50K words in a month goal. Just write. Keep up the momentum. Don't turn back until you hit your daily goal, whatever you set it to be. 

For the past NaNoWriMo's that I've done, I've been working on and through Waiting for Paint to Dry. This year NaNoWriMo just happens to coincide with my starting a new project, so it's kismet, perfect timing, and all that jazz! I'm a mix between a "seater" and a "panster" so I've got some notes and a rough outline done'ish for Caught By The Sun, the second in the Bell Sisters Series

I'm so excited to get started and can't wait to meet some new writer buddies to enjoy the ride with.Are you coming too?!

Just remember... even if you only write 5,000 words or 10,000 words come November 30th, it's more than most people ever write

The whole point of NaNoWriMo is this: just write :)

So sign up for NaNoWriMo today and find writer buddies to enjoy the ride with!

:) 

Sunday, October 13, 2013

What to Write Next? When Characthers Get Demanding...

There's a war waging in my head. Characters I've dreamt up are battling it out for who gets to go first.

Sequel novel or the new idea novel?

I've got others in the wings, but it's these two that are more vocal. Maybe it's because last NaNoWriMo I started the sequel to Waiting for Paint to Dry, just to test the waters to see if it would be a viable idea.

And it was.

So now those characters are anxious to have their story told. But I've been busy researching a new idea for some time and the story builds in my mind every day, so it's a toss up which one I should do, as both are exciting endeavors. Although in total opposite ways.

So I asked a focus group - aka, my children - their opinion and they are split as well. The Hubby doesn't read women's fiction so he doesn't care either way. He'll vote when a story ends in tragedy only.

So I think I'll leave it up to NaNoWriMo again. I'll start both projects and see which one takes off on it's own. Because it's not really me who writes the story - it's the characters.

I feel I know who is going to win - the sequel novel characters - because they have momentum built not only from last year's NaNoWriMo adventure, but also since they were just being written about in Waiting for Paint to Dry. I've got the manuscript out in query mode, hoping for a bite, so they are active in my mind in many more ways than who gets to go first.

My new novel idea has it's own momentum, but I think it's okay to simmer a while longer. I've got some more research to do for that one and I don't want to rush it. The sequel doesn't need much research. It just needs to take off.

Hmm...

It seems I've made up my mind at long last ;) Only took a few weeks after finishing up my first novel Waiting for Paint to Dry.

Cool. Can't wait to get started on the sequel now! Wow, the excitement that comes from a just a second ago decision... The sequel continues the Bell sisters' saga. Title? Caught by the Sun. My daughter came up with that one when she was three. Cutest moment driving in the car ever.

"Mommy? You know what would be a good title? Caught by the Sun. Because look! We're caught by the sun!" I don't remember how the conversation started, but I'm glad she and I were talking. Neither of us knew what that title would end up being for, but ever since she said it, I've wanted to use it.

And so I am.

Caught by the Sun it is. Can't wait to get started!

:)

Saturday, October 12, 2013

#BBSaturdayNightReads - 10/12/13


Marilyn did it. You do it. And we all love it.

Reading ;)

Saturday Night Reads at the BB B&B are just that: reading books on Saturday night. And lots of them!

So get comfy. Pour a glass of your favorite cab or grab a beer. And read. Anything and everything you love to read.

Just read.

And win ;)

Post what you're reading here on this Saturday Night Reads blog posts and enter for a chance to win something fun. Each week will be something different, so make sure you enter every Saturday!

You can also enter to win by posting on Twitter with the hashtag #BBSaturdayNightReads or on Facebook. 

Simply comment on the blog post each Saturday with what you're reading:

Title, author, what chapter your on...you can even tell us a bit about why you picked up the book in the first place and now why you can't seem to put it down!

Doors open at 8pm...Here's how it works:
  1. Comment on the BB Saturday Night Reads blog post, facebook or twitter (that Saturday) with the hashtag #BBSaturdayNightReads. You can comment once for the night OR every hour to increase your chances to win! One entry per, person per hour, thanks!

  2. In your blog comment, facebook post or twitter post, tell us what book you're reading - Title/Author - and a little bit about the book, story, characters, author, anything... What drew you to pick it up in the first place? What part are you at now? Is the writing good? Your favorite author? Does it suck? Are you hooked? Anything!
And maybe you'll win something ;)

This is, of course, in addition to the big win you'll already be enjoying by actually getting a chance to sit down and read.

 ;) 

Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Blissfully Beguiling on a Tuesday Morning... Compost, Eggs and ADD...


This beautiful Tuesday morning started off with a huge disagreement between my son and I: who's compost was the best. Mine or his school's?

Yep, this is what we discuss at the Mack household ;)

Needless to say I stand my ground. My compost is the best! I tend to it everyday I have kitchen scraps to add to the pile, which is at least twice a week. And it gets plenty of sunlight and all natural rain. Some days I don't get to it even when I have a overflowing pile of kitchen scraps, but those days are the cold, rainy sort - or the hot humid summer sort - where I just don't want to walk all the way out to the back back of my backyard where my garden lies.

And boy, am I a wishful, hopeful backyard gardener. To say I'm a gardener while looking at my garden this year is a pretty big oxymoron. My garden is sadly nonexistent. Some years my garden starts strong and stays strong all throughout the summer. Some years it starts strong and ends up being overrun by weeds, like this summer. Other years it doesn't even start. But my compost.... My compost rocks.

Yep, my compost rocks ;)

After walking the dogs this morning, I took out my big pile of kitchen scraps out to my compost pile. I canned some sauerkraut and pickles yesterday to ferment over the next 3 days, so I had tons of cabbage scraps and whatnot to toss. While turning my compost I noticed I was standing amidst yet another volunteer squash vine! I've already harvested 3 huge beautiful Cinderella Pumpkins from the side yard volunteer vine, so as always I'm hopeful something will produce. Only the weather has turned a sharp shade of cold, so I don't think these blossoms will turn into anything but beautiful. But they are still pretty. And if my mom has her way, they'll be eaten - fried squash blossoms anyone?

Of course I did all this compost turning and garden lamenting after I started making eggs for breakfast... But what writer doesn't enjoy at least a small dose of ADD... ;)

Thankfully the eggs didn't fair all too badly. This is my usual go to breakfast - two eggs (free range, local, organic) fried in butter (grass-fed, local, organic). Why? Eggs are high in Omega3, which is anti-inflammatory, and your brain needs fat to function. Simple as that. Two eggs a day is the perfect way to start the day off in a healthy way - and it's easy - so that's why I do it.


I like ease with a purpose.

 ;)

Monday, October 7, 2013

Pumpkin Breakfast Scones

Here at the BB B&B I serve breakfast to all my guests. Most of the time there's only a handful of you here. But with the BB Writers Retreat underway and #SaturdayNightReads tomorrow, well, there's quite a few hungry hearts here to feed!

For a hungry crowd, I always serve up seasonal scones. Raspberry Scones when raspberries are plentiful. Hot Cocoa Scones when it's snowing outside. And Pumpkin Scones when the leaves are turning, falling, and pumpkins are all around.

My go to scone recipe comes from my all time favorite baker Amanda Green from A Whole Lot of Crock. In her own words, "this is a recipe I created and have made in thousands of different combinations, depending on my mood, the season, what ingredients I have in the house and, most of all, what sounds really good that morning for breakfast."


Pumpkin Breakfast Scones
  • 2 cups flour (can use gluten free flour)
  • 1/3 cup sugar + a tablespoon
  • 2 tsp baking powder
  • 1/2 tsp baking soda
  • 1/2 tsp salt
  • 2 tsp vanilla bean paste 
  • 1 Tbsp pumpkin spice
  • 6 tbsp softened butter
  • 1 cup canned pumpkin puree
  • + additional liquid (milk, heavy whipping cream, almond milk, coconut milk, soy milk or water)
  1. Mix dry ingredients. Cut in butter.
  2. Add pumpkin and vanilla bean paste. Stir until combined.
  3. Add additional liquid if needed until "just moist". Stir until combined.
  4. Place on baking sheet in mounds for individual scones OR in a one round and score to make "pie" shaped pieces.
  5. Bake @ 425 for 15 minutes.
Enjoy!

:)

Friday, October 4, 2013

Saturday Night Reads at the BB!

While I write, I read. All writers read. Or at least they should.

In the words of Stephen King, "If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that."

So with that in mind, as part of the BB Writers Retreat here at the BB B&B I host weekly #BBSaturdayNightReads.

It's a place for us writers - aspiring, published, and all - to get together with some good drinks and treats and read. Every hour we break for a few minutes of sharing chatter (aka, blog commenting, twitter posting), wine glass refills and door prizes! (aka, free giveaways to participants :)

Doors open at Satudays 4pm... Here's how it works:

  1. Comment on the BB Saturday Night Reads blog post, facebook or twitter (that Saturday) with the hashtag #BBSaturdayNightReads. You can comment once for the night OR every hour to increase your chances to win! One entry per, person per hour, thanks!

  2. In your blog comment, facebook post or twitter post, tell us what book you're reading - Title/Author - and a little bit about the book, story, characters, author, anything... What drew you to pick it up in the first place? What part are you at now? Is the writing good? Your favorite author? Does it suck? Are you hooked? Anything!
Win what? That will be different from week to week, so be sure to comment in the post or on twitter hourly for a chance to win something fun! There will only be one winner per Saturday, but rest assured... you can win again if you win once ;)

And thank you for participating in the BB Writers Retreat Saturday Night Reads!!!

:)


Thursday, October 3, 2013

Lia Mack's BB Writers Retreat presents... Interview with Carolyn R Parsons, poet and author of The Secrets of Rare Moon Ticke

Welcome to the very first of Lia Mack's BB Writers Retreat series! 

As part of our October writers retreat we are very fortunate to have with us published author and poet Carolyn R Parsons.

Carolyn R Parsons, poet and author of The Secrets of Rare Moon Tickle and Wind Rhymes
  
Carolyn R Parsons is here with us to talk about her writing career, her poetry book Wind Rhymes, and give us some insights from her debut novel The Secrets of Rare Moon Tickle.

Lia Mack: Carolyn, thank you so much for being part of the BB Writers Retreat series. Please start us off by telling a little about yourself:


Carolyn R Parsons: Hello, I'm Carolyn R Parsons. I am the married mother of 4 daughters and I have a grandson who is three.  My  husband’s name is Kent and to the family and school etc., I am Carolyn Chaffey. I write under my maiden name as I was published prior to my marriage.  


I am first and foremost a poet, but I’ve written everything from how-to content for websites to opinion pieces for newspapers to short stories to a novel. I’ve received a few Canadian awards, been included in a couple of prestigious magazines and poetry anthologies.  I have an online presence with the Breeze Daze on blogger.  

Lia Mack: Wonderful. Now for the ultimate question... 

Why do you write?  

Carolyn R Parsons: I don’t know.  Why do I breathe? I have no memory of when I began either.  The odd thing is I’m very visual so it was always possible that I would fall into film or theater or fine art since I “see” what I write about and my descriptive writing is my strength with dialogue being my greater challenge.  

But words are my thing and I love the fun of rearranging them into something that wasn’t there before.  A turn of phrase, a collection of words set down in a way that is brand new, never done, completely reflective of and from inside me and something nobody else could have done. I create with words and to create is our strongest human drive.  It’s what builds cities and it’s what tears them down—humans even create destruction. 

Lia Mack: Very true.

About your writing... From when you first started writing to now, how do you feel you've grown as a writer?

 

Carolyn R Parsons: I’ve gotten better of course.  Practice makes—not even close to perfect, but I’m improved.  I’ve let go of anything that inhibits the flow of writing and accepted that the first draft will be crap no matter how good it eventually becomes.  I’m better at making things better.  I’m also better at knowing when it’s finished.  I’m not better at using the word better too often though.

I think that's perfect advice: let go of anything that inhibits the flow of writing. And I agree with you about first drafts ;)


Lia Mack: What made you decide to write as a career? 

Carolyn R Parsons: It was just plain old opportunity.  I had always written and wrote more when I became a stay at home mom ten years ago, but just for me.  Then when the youngest daughter entered junior kindergarten, the idea to start a serious writing career came to the surface and eventual fruition.  A dam burst and I wrote a 100,000 word novel in approximately six months.  I wrote and still write, every day. 

Lia Mack: That's the key, isn't it?  

Write, every day.

The Secret of Rare Moon Tickle. I've read it and loved your debut novel.  Can you tell us a little about it and what were the greatest and toughest parts of telling this story?

Carolyn R Parsons: There is a lot of myself in The Secrets of Rare Moon Tickle and it started out in first person. I think the best thing that happened with this story is I started just telling the truth and it was maybe about 25000 words for the entire story which was a good sized summary. Then I went through and started to write it in third person keeping some of the aspects of the true story/journal part of it but fictionalizing a great deal of it also. There are incidents in there that are 100% true in that they happened but they didn't necessarily happen in the context. It was good that I got to use my own stories sometimes but within the safety of fiction. I've been storified. 

90% of the story is my imagination, the characters are based loosely upon some people I've known but that's the extent of that. The toughest part was just working through it after editing it down to something manageable. It was 120,000 words and ended up at 99,000 including removing the main character's entire university career. I jumped over it and that was fine because after writing it it was firmly in place in my own mind so I could delete it and refer to it rather than drag the reader through the boring stuff. 

Lia Mack: In regards to your poetry, will there be a second collection coming out soon?

Carolyn R Parsons: As to another poetry book, poetry is my fun thing. I have a collection of love poetry that I would like to see published. I've not even tried to do so however. It's better than the first book was so there is no reason except my own laziness about organizing and submitting to a few places. Here is a sample. This is perhaps my own favourite and yes I write in rhyme. What of it? It's how it comes to me. I'm a balladier I suppose. 

My Ordinary Life

My ordinary life is flash and sparkle
dazzling days and glimmering frosted happy eyes
My ordinary life magnetizes and authorizes
all lips to smile and hearts to sympathize

My ordinary life is fashioned from twinkling stars
and woven in the daylight's misty songs
My ordinary life whispers words of love and passion
and sets about to right a million wrongs

My ordinary life sees miracles and grabs them
and shares them with the passers that go by
My ordinary life shines like an angel's halo
and makes the devil want some wings to try to fly

My ordinary life knows wonder and excitement
and laughter likes to wander in and tarry
so that I wonder if indeed it's true
that this life I claim for me is ordinary

I do have a submission in a book coming out next year I think. It's a collection of stories of cats from all over the world called Nine Lives. Nine stories from Tripoli, Montreal, Ontario and of course Newfoundland. The authors are actors and writers and other artists of note from around the globe. Should be fun.

Lia Mack: That was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing some of your poetry with us. And as for the book on cats, you'll have to let us know when it comes out ;)

Going back to your writing career, can you describe a bit how your venture into writing looked like?

 Carolyn R Parsons: While I veered off into a business life, managed at a community newspaper, worked for stock brokers, every single thing I’ve ever done has prepared me to be a writer.  I’m a better writer because I’ve marketed and promoted and run businesses in the past.  I know how to sell my work and I know how to find the people to help me learn my work. My parenting has made me learn to write under the strangest situations, with babes at the breast and dogs at my feet. I’ve had periods where I didn’t write and they let me live the things I wrote of later on. 

Lia Mack: Speaking of marketing, what are your thoughts on the necessity of writers building a platform?

Carolyn R Parsons: I started branding very early on.  I use my name with the middle initial everywhere, I created a blog, I created a Twitter and I use my personal Facebook.  I include people in my writing as I work at things and get them engaged in the story to some degree.  I am a social networking fiend and expert and I even have run a Facebook page for a well-known celebrity.  I’m still an administrator there.  It’s not necessary for writing of course but the benefits are down the road when time for selling comes.   

Lia Mack: What does your typical writing day look like?  

Carolyn R Parsons: I write a weekly column for our local newspaper and a bi-weekly art feature.   I also do lots of human interest stories and have done some impactful news stories.  Each day I get up before 8am and send kids off to school, drink lots of coffee and write.  At 11:30 I go to the gym on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.  On non-gym days I go for a walk for an hour.  Then I return home and write some more. Some of it is the book, other times it’s the newspaper stuff.  If it’s for the newspaper, part of writing is often interviews and they are done at the convenience of the interviewee and myself.   I read and do other things around the kids.  I research in the evenings with the kids around.  I’ve cut back on the newspaper stuff just to concentrate on the book now. 

Lia Mack: Speaking of reading, do you read a lot while you write? 

Carolyn R Parsons: Yes, voraciously.  In fact when I’m working deeply on a project as I am now, I read more. Currently I’m reading a political biography of two former premiers of the province I live in, the first who brought us to join Canada and the second who decades later toppled him from power, written by a fellow who was there through it all who also happens to be a brilliant writer.  I am a political junkie so I love that stuff.  I also love Stephen King.  I don’t particularly choose genres, just grab what I fancy.  I have for a long time read almost exclusively Canadian and Newfoundland work and just the top rated American and world authors. 

Lia Mack: For fun, can you share with us what your writing space is like? 

Carolyn R Parsons: Yes, I have a beautiful writing space that I created in our new home in a colour I love with an ocean view.  And wouldn’t you know that for weeks I’ve been writing on the couch because I don’t have a comfortable chair.  I’m chair shopping now!  Would you like to see a photo of my space? 

Lia Mack: Absolutely! An ocean view... that's pretty close to perfect ;)

Carolyn, if you could go back in time, what advice would you give yourself if you could speak to the aspiring writer you once were?
  


Carolyn R Parsons: Just fucking write. 

Don’t think about publishing or being good enough or anything, just perfect your craft.  You’re not a publisher, you’re a writer.  The publishing has nothing to do with writing. Write write write write.

Then, when you retire from writing, write.  And if you finish something and need a break from the writing, start querying then, which of course, is writing. 

Also, never take writing advice from other writers who have yet to be published or produce any amount of work. Avoid critique groups like the plague because the need to criticize another person’s creative efforts is a character flaw and those folks are just psychos.  To take criticism from somebody who is exactly like you is like sending your kids to school for other kids to teach. 

Take classes and workshops on the craft from the experts and use your own brain and heart and soul to make what you write yours.  But don’t get so “trained” you lose the art either. 

Don’t be so concise you lose expression or so tightly perfect technically you lose your voice.  Keep all the rules except for when you have to bend them. And never bend them except for those times you have to break them.

Also, one more thing,  Read On Writing by Stephen King. Keep it beside you. Put it under your pillow.  Make a shrine to it with candles and crystals and stuff.  Ok this wasn’t around for young writer me but let’s pretend I’m 20 still ok?  It’s fine to read all sorts of books about writing.  But the conclusion you may find you come to is that it’s the only one you really need.


Lia Mack: That is all perfect advice, from Just f'n write to reading On Writing by Stephen King. 

Love it.

Lastly and quickly, could your share with us your six-word-motto?  


Carolyn R Parsons: Easy come, easy go, walk on. 

It’s all fleeting, stay unattached, keep moving forward because this moment is the only one you have, therefore the only one that matters.
 


Lia Mack: Carolyn R Parsons, thank you so very much for being a part of the BB Writers Retreat series, and our very first guest speaker.

Where can BB readers go online to find you and your work?


Carolyn R Parsons:
www.CarolynRParsons.com

For the newspaper column, art feature and other stories: http://www.lportepilot.ca/

My blog is at BreezeDaze.blogspot.com

I'm also on Facebook as Carolyn R. Parsons. (Please add me and say you’re Lia Mack’s friend in a message.)

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Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Portfolio

Below are my best example of listening to user needs while meeting business objectives.

Please click images below:

NHU.edu users are primarily visual as well as most being first time computer/online users. Making the website both functional and easy to use was paramount. For this landing page, I came up with a clean, streamlined look and feel while using the university's color scheme. With my wireframe design, the graphics team then took care of finding or creating icons to fulfill the design requirement. As a team we fine-tuned what icons would be used. I then created the HTML/CSS to prototype for approval and then did the build out to create the final product.
 

Again, NHU.edu users are predominantly visual users. While keeping with the NHU approved color scheme, I created these easy to read class course descriptions and fulfilled the HTML/CSS prototype and web development for the entire course load of the university. Business managers and stakeholders gave the final okay on the design.




The NHU.edu News section was a ground up new design and would be used by a new set of users/persona. Not only would I have the typical NHU visual user, but also media outlets. With this in mind, I envisioned the user persona that would visit this section of the site and designed accordingly. The left hand navigation holds true to the visual assistance of colors and icons as well as giving media-users the info chunk area they need along with the aid of visual differentiation.



After wire-framing some ideas and explaining again that NHU users - almost all Latin - are highly visual, business agreed to a trial run of this design. The results were exactly what I anticipated and thus the design is still in use today. Users want to see what they are looking for. Business wants the users to know by the content given where they are headed. Both sides of the coin were considered and both objectives achieved by this design.

After wireframing and prototyping out the page in HMTL/CSS, Business gave the okay to develop and go live. I especially enjoyed the sole ownership of this process but welcome the opportunity to work with a team toward user/business objectives.

To combine many elements on one page - video, content, images - and keep the design to a minimum was key to this landing page. All landing pages of the NHU website followed in suit to this design. After wireframing and prototyping out the page in HMTL/CSS, Business gave the okay to develop and go live. I especially enjoyed the sole ownership of this process but welcome the opportunity to work with a team toward user/business objectives.



The October BB Writers Retreat Starts Thursday... So Reserve Your Spot Today!

Well, you don't really have to reserve a spot... you just have to be here, on my blog ;)

This coming Thursday, I'll be kicking off my very first BB Writers Retreat! And I have a very special guest author speaker.
I'll give you a hint on who it's going to be... it's a SECRET... Secret. That's the hint. Like it?

Then the next day, Friday, there will be a giveaway - a signed copy of our guest author's novel! To enter the giveaway, all you'll have to do is comment on the giveaway blog post. How easy and great is that?!?

Finally, before going off in all our different directions to write, I'm hosting our very first Saturday Night Read, where we'll get together here on the BB B&B - maybe with a glass of wine or two - and read. To participate, just post what book you're enjoying for your Saturday Night Read, which will automatically enter you into a chance to win! Win what, that will be different from week to week, so be sure to comment in the post weekly for a chance to win something fun :)

So there you have it, excitement coming your way to start you off on your writing. Make sure to let us know what you're working on and how far you've come since last month. Of course, this being our first month we'll have to just start - but by next month you'll have made some headway, I just know it!

:)